SCREENPLAY
LOCATION 1: HARRY'S room. It has a large window with a view of the street, including MR. KARK'S
house. The room should be slightly messy so that it can coincide with the stereotypical room
teenager.
LOCATION 2: MR KARK'S living room. It should be extremely tidy and have all the normal things that
anybody's living room would have. This is representative of his character; seems completely
normal on the outside but hides deep and disturbing secrets.
LOCATION 3: The street on which the houses which are involved are on.
LOCATION 1-NIGHT
HARRY is in his wheelchair and the camera zooms in as he falls asleep.
BLACKOUT
MONTAGE:
LOCATION 1- NIGHT
MR KARK and DATE 1 walking along the street and into his house.
LOCATION 2- NIGHT
MR KARK and DATE 1 clinking wine glasses together, they are smiling and laughing.
BLACKOUT
Sounds of the glasses dropping and DATE 1 screaming.
LOCATION 2- NIGHT
A view of MR KARK'S feet walking away and then the audience will see the whole room and DATE 1 is lying dead on the floor.
BLACKOUT
Proficient (L3) planning and good description of setting. More dialogue and character development would make this even better.
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